Overall, your essay is good. I suggest that you elaborate what "you" can offer the college. Let your credentials, your attributes, your attitude, and whatever else to make you stand out. I will have to admit-they will look at your grades and think very hard about admitting you but you should know grades aren't everything. You should try your best, your absolute grand to write the best essay you can. On some sentences you put "you" when "you're" or "you are" is needed. Have your English teacher or another adult who can help give you some help on your essay. Like I said earlier let yourself shine through that paper. That's the only way you will stand a chance of getting admitted or not. Never give up, be doubtful, or let yourself down. God works in mysterious ways.
How are Morehouse's dorms ? Which is the best dorm to live in? How are Morehouse's academics. What is there to do at Morehouse? My biology teacher went to Spelman and said that Morehouse was a great school but I just wanted some more opinions.